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You recently visited a friend and stayed at their house. During your stay, you accidentally damaged something in their home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, apologize for the damage, explain how it happened, and offer to resolve the situation.

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Dear Emily, I hope this letter finds you well. I wanted to express my sincerest apologies for the incident that occurred during my recent stay at your lovely home. Unfortunately, while I was trying to close the window in the guest room, it slipped from my grasp and the glass shattered. I cannot express enough how sorry I am for this mishap. The moment it happened, I felt terrible about the damage caused. It was an accident, but I take full responsibility for it. I understand the inconvenience this may cause you, and I want to make it right. To resolve the situation, I am more than willing to cover the cost of the repair. Please let me know the best way to proceed, whether it involves me arranging for someone to repair the window or if you prefer to have it done and I reimburse you for the expenses. Once again, I am truly sorry for any trouble this has caused you. I value our friendship greatly and hope to make amends in any way I can. Warm regards, Alex

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