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You recently visited a friend and accidentally left a small bag containing some personal items at their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain what happened, describe the bag and its contents, and say what you would like your friend to do.

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Dear Emily, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you about a small mishap that occurred during my last visit to your lovely home. It seems I have accidentally left behind a small bag, and I am hoping you might be able to assist me in retrieving it. The bag in question is a navy-blue canvas tote, quite compact but with a distinctive silver clasp. Inside, you would find a couple of personal items that are of great sentimental value to me: a small red notebook filled with poetry I've written, a silver pen gifted to me by my grandfather, and a set of keys. I realize this might be an inconvenience for you, but I would greatly appreciate it if you could look for the bag. If you do find it, could you please let me know? I can arrange to pick it up at a time that is convenient for you, or if it's easier, I could also provide you with a postal address to send it to. Thank you so much for understanding and for your help with this matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Warm regards, Alex

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