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You recently moved to a new city for work and have rented a house for the next few months. After living there for a week, you have noticed a few problems with the house that need to be addressed. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, introduce yourself, explain what the problems are, and suggest what you would like the landlord to do about these issues.
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Dear Mr. Thompson,
I hope this letter finds you well. My name is Alex Johnson, and I recently moved into your property at 24 Maple Street, which I am renting for the next six months while I work on a project here in the city. I wanted to bring a few issues to your attention that I have encountered since moving in last week.
Firstly, I have noticed that the heating system does not seem to be working properly, as the house remains quite cold, especially during the night. Additionally, there are a few leaking taps in the bathroom and kitchen that are not only annoying but are also wasting water. Lastly, one of the bedroom windows does not close completely, which could be a security concern.
I was hoping you could arrange for someone to come and fix these issues at your earliest convenience. I believe that addressing these problems promptly will ensure a comfortable and secure living environment for the duration of my stay.
Thank you for your attention to these matters. I look forward to your prompt response.
Sincerely,
Alex Johnson
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